Mirror+writing

**Curtis** Draft 2 **The boy stairing back at me seems familiar. His blue eyes, like the deep blue sky, light up his face. He has big bags around his eyes from not enough sleep. His oily blond hair has a brown tinge which makes his hair look messy. The** __freckles__ **on his face make him look like he** __has not__ **washed his face for a while.**


 * He was born in the year 1997 at W__aikato(Capital letter)__ __hospitall__. In his exciting 11 years he has had many amazing __adventurs__ and __expireces__. One memory that he had that is still in his mind was when Curtis and his best friend got the hose and covered the back yard with water. To his mums horror they had been running up the driveway and jumping**
 * onto the wet grass which was as muddy as a ript up rugby field. His friend got sent home.**


 * His ambtions are becoming a tallblack or to play for a __poupuler__ basketball team. If** **that is not possible he will try out for being an __arcitect__. He used to go to Waikato Waldorf school. He is now at F__airfield intermediate__ __wich__ he __enjoyes__ much more. As he walks away from the mirror he says 'I'll have the same adveture tomorrow'.**
 * by Curtis

//__Miss Crawford - A great effort, Curtis. I can just imagine your mum's face! :) There are a few spelling errors taht need to be changed, I have underlined those. Don't forget to use Capital letters at the beginning of proper nouns (names). I wonder, could you add more descriptive language to your second paragraph? Describe the lawn? Could you use a simile to help describe it? Or how it felt to slide along the lawn?__//**